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Hey everyone I am Iskander. This is my kickstarter so far please review rate love and slander. https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/17 ... n=e29864ee on monday the third i will make it live after doing all the final edditing i would love oppinions on telling the story better and grammar and what you think of my project. Also any advice on where and how to promote it when i make it live would be much appritiated. I might put a vid up i was considering it but i havent really spoken in a few weeks and i recont i could probably muster up right now is a weird sounding hi, or i was thinking of putting one up with me flicking a few bits of paper with a few greetings on there. But for now if i can have your help in editing the literature or even leaving it as is if you think the message gets across.

1. Break up the blocks of text. It's very difficult to read.
See: http://www.crowdcrux.com/copywriting-ti ... ter-pitch/

2. Definitely include a video. Some stats show it increases your chance of success by over 60%

3. On promotion, see the "marketing and promotion" section of this page: http://www.crowdcrux.com/best-crowdfunding-articles/

ok thanks ive uploaded a vid now my problem is im not a speaker or a video guys so i done a scrapbook theme but i will also look to add in some pics of potential locations over the weekend