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    Hi there!

    by colinbutler » Sat May 04, 2013 6:31 am

    My name Is colin Butler and I am currently running a Kickstarter Project called The Vast #1. I would really appreciate any and all feedback that may help me be more successful.


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    Re: Hi there!

    by sbriggman » Sat May 04, 2013 8:48 pm

    Hi Colin,

    I really like the artwork and the reward structure. I think the video is the weakest part of the campaign. I think it would be better if there was a bit of a narration first, then you show the pictures, and then finish narrating. Also, I think you could appear a bit more confident in the video (or excited).

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    Re: Hi there!

    by colinbutler » Sun May 05, 2013 4:18 am

    Hey thanks for the reply, you have a good point about the video. it only has a 13.7 finished viewing rate for 16 views and its only 3 minutes long. Thanks I will try to spruce it up a bit.

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