by sbriggman » Sat May 04, 2013 8:48 pm
Hi Colin,
I really like the artwork and the reward structure. I think the video is the weakest part of the campaign. I think it would be better if there was a bit of a narration first, then you show the pictures, and then finish narrating. Also, I think you could appear a bit more confident in the video (or excited).
Sal
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