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  • carlosunseri
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    Hello

    by carlosunseri » Thu Sep 19, 2013 5:36 pm

    Hey guys, i'm Carlo. Love the forums. Its awesome to see so many people discussing Kickstarter projects!

    I plan on launching my project pretty soon but am trying to get feedback from unbiased people! (non-family and friends haha)

    So here it goes, below is my Kickstarter campaign draft... Any thoughts would be hugely appreciated! See you on the forums!

    Carlo

    http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/lacrosse/1008253437?token=cb75f142


    Looking for unbiased feedback on my first Kickstarter project :)

    What do you think of the video? Rewards okay? http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/lacrosse/1008253437?token=cb75f142

    Or do you like this video style better? http://youtu.be/oryCody3fzU
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    Re: Hello

    by sbriggman » Tue Sep 24, 2013 8:04 pm

    Seems like a really cool idea. $25 is pretty reasonable for a digital copy of the game also. One thing I might change is to add more images in the beginning of your written text to help break up the messages, otherwise it's kind of overwhelming when you first look at it.
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