by Charles » Wed Aug 06, 2014 1:16 am
I like BBQ. There can never be too many BBQ Empires.
Your KickStarter project page, however, doesn't seem ambitious, enough, to qualify as BBQ-style imperial aspirations.
You haven't linked Facebook in, and the website that you linked in has nothing to do with BBQ.
This "empire" doesn't even have a name, it seems. A KickStarter seeking to raise thousands of dollars for a nameless empire? Good luck with that approach.
Plus, you don't even have a video. All the less to tempt us with, I guess. Of course, how much visual impact will your project page have, since people can't smell the BBQ through it, and there is no video to show us mouth-watering BBQ. You've got a few photographs, none of which show people socializing while eating and enjoying your BBQ. Just photographs of food and equipment, devoid of life anywhere to be found in any of them.
Additionally, your KickStarter project page says:
with the funding I hope to receive I will purchase a mobile unit that can travel with me. Professional units run $4,000 to $25,000...I believe I have the skill to achieve my goal with the low end of that scale .
If the low end of the scale is $4,000, and you think that you can achieve your goal with the low end of the scale, then why did you set your funding goal at $6,000, which is 50% more than the low end of the scale?
All that aside, you have a black and white logo. It's not a memorable logo. It's less a black and white problem, than it is a logo design problem.
You have been honing your skills and perfecting your craft over the last decade. How come you haven't posted any references from real people advocating in favor of your BBQ?
A generic BBQ Empire name of BBQ Empire does not tout the personal nature of your BBQ.