by hyperstarter » Wed Nov 23, 2016 12:46 pm
The Helix looks pretty good, but what the page is missing is a clear list of features and the selling points...it doesn't have them.
As you scroll down the page the first couple of images are tech specs, instead of seeing the Helix being used in different situations. Then as you go down the page (based on imagery) alone, it starts to look confusing and too technical.
Just a text and images as to what Helix is, how it can help and focus on your target audience.
Who have you connected with already and who will be able to write about you? Let me know if you need any help as I think it's got potential.