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Liked your company on Facebook!

My partner and I just wen live with our card game, The Art of Debate. Any shares are SO much appreciated

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/15 ... -card-game

200 Projects! Nice work

Scottradamson wrote:200 Projects! Nice work

Thanks Scott...actually I'm over 500 right now but have stopped...been quite busy working on my own upcoming KS campaign. I do help review people's campaigns though

cheers

AlexLipinski wrote:Liked your company on Facebook!

My partner and I just wen live with our card game, The Art of Debate. Any shares are SO much appreciated

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/15 ... -card-game

Hi Alex, sorry...been busy on my own upcoming campaign but here's some quick feedback...

1) you have 3 thank you perks...1st 3. I suggest cutting back to only 1.

2) Your $20 reward is the first with tangible product. You should show the retail price savings and limit quantity. Then show another same reward at $25 or $29 and limit that as well. Keep the illusion of scarcity going

4) remove "Risk and challenges" from your reward section. Minimize the text in all rewards. People can find the risks section themselves. ANd you can add your delivery dates in all rewards (required)

5) It seems like your $40 rewards is simply 2 times your $20 reward. If so, no incentive. Adjust pricing. Remove repetitive text between rewards

6) $200 just to come up with a topic seems a touch high, but I like the fact that people can get their names on it

7) your page is a bit too texty, I would replace some text with graphics if possible
Good luck

Kudos to you for supporting so many people!

Here's our Kickstarter if you want to have a look-see: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ya ... e-letter-2

MES Records wrote:Just wanted to say thanks for doing this. I'll definitely reach out to you if I need help with my campaign!

Anytime

yangyangmobile wrote:Kudos to you for supporting so many people!

Here's our Kickstarter if you want to have a look-see: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ya ... e-letter-2

John & Danni, my feedback...and I realize you're well into your campaign but I'm going to point it out anyways

1) video: 3:26 time is a bit long but I wouldn't mind if it was captivating. But the first half goes very slow while you tell pieces of the story with characters. The second half is annoying because the voice over is barely comprehensible. Not loud enough and perhaps weak english. Should've had someone else do it. You realized it was weak because you added all sub-titles. If you expect to raise decent money in North America, you should take the time to ensure the video seems 'western'

2) demo links are good

3) Why do you have a Paypal link on your page now? You should have it at the end of your campaign because if people back you on paypal instead of KS, you may not hit your KS goal

4) Stretch goal graphic is weak

5) characters, story, screenshots, use of funds...all good

6) Storyline graphic is a waste,..can't see anything

Good luck guys

Hi Greg,

We have just launched the world's FIRST self-drying jacket, just like the one in Back To The Future Part II. We would love to hear your feedback on our campaign.

Thanks!

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/fa ... ket-sdj-01

Falyon wrote:Hi Greg,

We have just launched the world's FIRST self-drying jacket, just like the one in Back To The Future Part II. We would love to hear your feedback on our campaign.

Thanks!

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/fa ... ket-sdj-01

Hi, my comments...don't take comments personally...just giving feedback

1) video: you have 10 seconds to capture viewer attention and 30 seconds to explain the campaign. The first 35 seconds of your video were boring. You showed me how the jacket worked starting at 00:38 and that is important but it took a long time. Then video gets boring again 1:08 to 1:14. 1:20 to 1:31 you demonstrate the jacket again. You could've started your entire video at the 1:18 mark. 1:35 to 2:00 is a waste. Explain the same thing a 3rd time...nothing new here. Someone should be talking to the camera, viewers connect with people, not product and the music gets annoying after a while. 2:06 you put all that text instead of having a voice over. 2:27 you show the jacket for a 4th time

2) main page: not bad, decent graphics except you show another video which is the same as the 00:38-1:08 of your main video

3) perks: $50 for basically nothing? $185 for the jacket..you should show the discount we get if we buy now compared to when it is available to the public

4) Looks like you didn't do any outreach, no press and no early backers. Very important to have friends and family back you early