Wizcorp wrote:Hello here!
I launched my Kickstarter campaign this week, it's a soccer game on iPad in 3D.
Check it out! (in my signature)
I'm open to every suggestion to improve and promote it.
Your project page is really impressive. I think that you will blow your funding goal out of the water.
Visually, your project page is not just impressive, it is hyper-impressive. You have a good, solid video, and your trailer video is superb. This project just oozes quality.
You have sources of authority being quoted about the game. That lends credibility to it.
Your goal, itself, strikes me as being super low, relative to how much that you can probably succeed at raising, funding-wise.
You have cartoon figures on display, as stand ins for actual photographs, as far as the game's creators go. That's actually a plus, I think.
You are using bold text in select instances, for highlighting and visual impact. Very nice job of that, by the way.
The character figures in the game look great. The sound is great.
This is going to be a successful crowdfunding effort, I think. Thus, you might want to increase the number of pledge level options. For example, create a $500 level, and something over $1,000. With this game, I think it's a possibility that you may gain a major backer.
The diagram images are great, also. Lots of visual heft and impact with those.
Your page lacks photos of people, either of game creators or of people testing or trying the game. Thus, it lacks on that social aspect of the project page's design. But, this is one project page where those who designed the page layout and created it certainly knew EXACTLY what they were doing. It's one of the best looking Kickstarter project pages that I have encountered, of those displayed in this forum.