by ZompireWolf » Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:18 pm
Looks pretty good! I'm finding that mobile games aren't as backed or promoted as console games. Nature of it I guess.
I like that your showing the gameplay but your video doesn't have any voiceover, music or explanation about you or what you want to do with the game once your finished building it. Is it free? Why am I paying $1 if it's free? Is there ads? Will my $1 get me the game ad free? I know you know this game inside out but as a first time viewer... I don't have a clue!
I'm giving you this feedback as I'm pretty sure you'll be back with a bigger and better game after this is released and you may need to have a bit more explanation in your video. It may be the best game in the world but wrap it up nicely and tie a ribbon around it! Best of luck!