Hi Ray!
Congratulations and best of luck to you. Your project looks really promising but see if you can improve the look of your campaign a bit more to attract eyes. Perhaps add more detail about your company. I also suggest looking at other successfully backed projects and compare to get some ideas.
I also started a Kickstarter project. It's a mobile game with awesome features from funny stories, challenging game play, awesome music, promotes positive vibes, etc. Please take a look. Perhaps it will inspire some ideas for you. Thanks and all the best!
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/18 ... -adventure