by AlexanderZ » Sun Jun 11, 2017 10:04 am
Your video production is really cool and professional but I don't understand your product from the first seconds of the video mainly because of the following reasons:
- too fast, I can't catch the whole glasses and focus on them in the beginning of the video;
- being not a native english speaker it takes some effort for me to understand what you are saying because of loud music and your pronunciation;
- you start with a question aiming at activating person's thinking but video is too short and fast it just puts a lot of unnecessary information into my head and lowers my focus for the rest of the video.
In conclusion, your product is really cool but you are asking a potential customer to make much effort to understand it. That's my opinion. Even if you set up perfect advertising and get huge number of leads the conversion will remain low if customers don't understand what you are trying to sell.
But I can be wrong:)