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Hi! I am just starting out and I don’t really know what I’m doing honestly. I am just trying to get the word out about my kickstarter project for my Yaoi horror Omegaverse manga called Fatal Moon located here
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/fa ... ref=wgzcq5

I would love feedback!

Unfortunately you'll have to spend quite a lot of time reworking the campaign. It needs to look like the average Kickstarter page, so it's full of content, imagery, videos, gifs and ideally have clear sections.

As it's a web comic, I'd expect to see where you were featured before online and direct references. It needs a ton more artwork and the rewards of keychains, plushies and tshirts aren't relevant...just give them an early bird copy of the book and go on from there.

I will get that together, I have a link to two of the videos and someone wants a keychain so I can’t change it now.