by Epsilon_Games » Sat Nov 18, 2017 7:54 pm
Hi, so I've looked at your video and here is my opinion.
First, the beginning.
I really get why you dd it this way, but starting with hard, strong, annoying noises for 28 seconds (28!!!) might not be the best idea. I just want to shut the noise down, press stop on the video.
Although I really get your point, I think the blessing of silence should come WAY earlier.
After the section with Kevin the musician; I think his testimony is alright, but we do get the idea really quickly and he talks about him and eventually about the product for a little over a minute. I feel like fast fowarding...
But then theres the DJ, and the woman in bars and it's getting really annoying for me. I don't want to hear what they say, I got it already, and I have the impression it's kinda cheesy.
For me the real interesting part starts at 3:16. IMHO, that is way too far. The attention for a video is about 3 minutes. And you deliver the real stuff, the info I want when I already am bored...
Sooooo, sincen video is really the presenting, entry card, I would humbly suggest to re-edit it.
I didn't want to be rude or anything, just giving my opinion of the video.
Thanks