by hyperstarter » Sun Mar 24, 2019 9:58 pm
There's not really a review service here, but I guess this forum has turned into one!
So the first problem I see is the penis mention. I know it's a great feature, but it doesn't have to be promoted in such a direct way + the combination of odor repelent isn't a great stucture of words.
I worked on the overfunded Mili-tech boxers campaign, where the focus was 100% on the benefits of odor protecting underwear, yours should follow suit.
Then after you've made fixes to your campaign page, start reaching out to writers/sites in your niche and try to get a mention.
Also look at getting support from your own network, social media mentions and just continue to get the word out there.
If we can help further, feel free to get in touch!