Hi Shanna - Cool video. I pledged a small amount. I really like the landscape and your thoughts on humanity. As for some feedback, I wasn't exactly sure what the storyline was about. I had a vague sense of the plot. I was personally more drawn to your mission to use your art/film to bring business to your hometown.
If you have time, would recommend checking out some of the cross promotion going on in the forum and keeping the community update on things you learn as you go through the Kickstarter process