Hi, I wasn't sure if you're looking for feedback on the campaign page...but I'll give it anyway
I'm a bit confused by this page, as initially I didn't like it. I saw what looks to be a home-made robot with weird eyes and images on the page which aren't high quality, but then when I watched the video and saw you were featured on tv and actual kids playing with it and interacting, my thinking changed.
My suggestion would be to look at the successfully funded competitors and base your page around them. Improve the design, layout and imagery...you have a *huge* potential money making project here, so it would be a shame if it didn't reach your goal at least.
If you need any further advice or would like me to get onboard the campaign, let me know and best of luck!